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[Short Poem] Endurance
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07-05-2011, 05:53 PM
(07-05-2011, 03:51 PM)SimonLoOo Wrote: This poem is truly meanful, you should do another poem Smile

I just make poems when I have the time and I feel in the mood lol. I'll make one soon though Smile
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07-08-2011, 09:15 AM
(07-05-2011, 05:53 PM)Veryx Wrote: I just make poems when I have the time and I feel in the mood lol. I'll make one soon though Smile

Soon please. This one is really good. But not so fast that it loses the artistic-ness behind. Big Grin

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07-09-2011, 12:32 AM
(07-08-2011, 09:15 AM)Mayhem Wrote: Soon please. This one is really good. But not so fast that it loses the artistic-ness behind. Big Grin

I actually made one right after he said that lol...

[Short Poem] Blood

which you have already read Tongue
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07-09-2011, 04:23 AM
(07-09-2011, 12:32 AM)Veryx Wrote: I actually made one right after he said that lol...

[Short Poem] Blood

which you have already read Tongue

And I loved it. MORE PLEASE!!!

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07-09-2011, 05:20 AM
Nice little poem but i love matching words.
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07-09-2011, 07:13 AM
Another great poem.

It has a lot of meaning for being only 8 sentences.

I hope to see more work out of you!
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07-09-2011, 10:33 AM
(07-09-2011, 07:13 AM)Justin Wrote: Another great poem.

It has a lot of meaning for being only 8 sentences.

I hope to see more work out of you!

Almost every single one of my poems are short Tongue most people like them though Big Grin

Thanks for feedback Smile short and meaningful is what I go for. Smile
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