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[Short Poem] Endurance
#1
Just a short little snippet really. I think it is nice though.

When all seems lost,
Open your eyes.

When time drags on,
Open your ears.

When the world seems bleak,
Open your mind.

When you lose yourself...
Open your heart.
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#2
This is a pretty meaningful little poem, very well made! I've noticed quite a few of your threads with Stories and Poems, they really are good!

Keep up the good work :-)
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#3
Short, sweet and at the same time useful advice. I like this <3
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#4
Nice and Meaningful poem.
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#5
Nice, I was never really good at poems. My last school project was about poems. I only turned in about a third of them.
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#6
Thank you guys Smile

Kuroi Wrote:Nice, I was never really good at poems. My last school project was about poems. I only turned in about a third of them.

I hated English class lol...
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#7
That's what everyone should do in everyday life. Great poem!
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#8
Really nice poem bro!
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#9
Haha i like this poem, it seems very deep and meaningful.
Please keep up the good work and continue to write Smile
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#10
This poem is truly meanful, you should do another poem Smile
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