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I Shot Bin Laden
The Sequel Offline
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#1
05-01-2011, 11:58 PM (This post was last modified: 05-02-2011, 12:30 AM by The Sequel.)
http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_8445895

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05-02-2011, 07:23 AM
Except you didn't really.
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05-02-2011, 07:32 AM
No offence but you're not a very good rapper.
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05-04-2011, 10:41 AM
Have you ever studied the actual art of rapping? Its a bit different then just spewing nonsensical lyrics over an instrumental.
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05-04-2011, 02:52 PM
(05-04-2011, 10:41 AM)BlackChaos Wrote: Have you ever studied the actual art of rapping? Its a bit different then just spewing nonsensical lyrics over an instrumental.

Leave the guy alone . He did it for the lulz .
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05-04-2011, 09:45 PM
(05-04-2011, 02:52 PM)Telhast Wrote: Leave the guy alone . He did it for the lulz .

Meh. Its not like we're any better, eh? Tongue
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05-04-2011, 10:07 PM
Your excessive usage of profanity just shows that you lack a variety of vocabulary.
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05-04-2011, 10:14 PM
(05-04-2011, 10:07 PM)Deltron Wrote: Your excessive usage of profanity just shows that you lack a variety of vocabulary.

Hallelujah! You get me. Roflmao
@OP If you're going to write a rap, next time I suggest you tone down on the profanity and write lyrics with a little more meaning. If not, then at least make it a bit funny like this one. Its humorous I guess Thumbsup
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05-04-2011, 10:18 PM
It was entertaining, nonetheless. If that's what you were aiming for, then well done.
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05-06-2011, 12:59 AM
Just try to expand your vocab a little, I cant say that I like this but good job lol.
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