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[Poem] The Road
#1
As I walk down this road by myself,
I imagine someone else walking side by side.
Someone who knows what I'm going through,
Who can help me reach the end of this arduous journey.
But he turns the other way, different direction and goal,
and I'm left feeling lost, cold and alone.
So I just keep on walking, head down, past everybody,
A shadow among the darkness,
Disguised by thoughts and actions
Of people trying to influence the journey ahead,
But my mind is set steady,
My heart and soul determined,
I'm passing past the passages between each memory,
Digging for new resolve,
Fighting till my last breath,
I won't give up till my all is set in stone once again.

BlackChaos (HRN)
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Author's Note: What do you feel when you read this poem? What are your thoughts? Share them below =)

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#2
I personally like it. But I'm not into poems tbh. (But I like it)
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#3
I feel as if this could be about a friend and you who might of chosen different paths in life maybe one good one bad and maybe you're struggling to not follow those same foot steps. Idk just my assumption.
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#4
(05-06-2011, 01:02 AM)dinosaurs Wrote: I feel as if this could be about a friend and you who might of chosen different paths in life maybe one good one bad and maybe you're struggling to not follow those same foot steps. Idk just my assumption.

Very good comprehension. This was in fact my motivation for this poem. Smile
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#5
Hey thanks, lucky guess I guessSmile
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#6
Very inspiring poem mate. I like it, keep it up!
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#7
(05-06-2011, 08:31 AM)harris21 Wrote: Very inspiring poem mate. I like it, keep it up!

Thank you Smile
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#8
I just finished reading a book called the road Smile
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