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[Poem] New Year, Old Memories
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Sweet memories we hold,
Fragile, yet strong.
Learnt so much in such short a time.
Done a lot right, and yet so much wrong.
For some was the birth of a new love,
The beauty of life knew no such breath.
For some it was success,
Glistening crown, glorious wreath.
For few, it was pain.
Broken heart, yet not mended.
But time heals all wounds,
As quickly as they ended.
For most, it was joy,
In one way or the other.
Its up to them to find it,
whether they want it or need it.
But for me, it was change,
And change I did.
Emerged from the ashes,
A fire left untended.
I've much to learn, a long way to go.
One step above me,
One foot down below.
The path, unsteady, unsure...

How quickly the year passed us by,
So silent. Just a wave, then good bye.
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#2
I really like this poem. Did you write this? Or did you find it online.
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#3
I write my own poems Smile
Usually, I just write whatever I feel. And I guess I'll start sharing them here Big Grin
Tell me what you guys think of them, and I'll post more soon.
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#4
This touched my heart. Waiting for more man.
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#5
As a writer, thats all I could ever want Smile
I'll post more soon.
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#6
More then awesome, believe me mate you are God gifted. This poem is awesome.
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(04-23-2011, 08:56 PM)_d3shI Wrote: More then awesome, believe me mate you are God gifted. This poem is awesome.

Thank you Big Grin
Thats quite a compliment! I'm going to have trouble keeping my ego small after your comment.
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#8
Beautiful . Get your talent recognized . Stop studying biology and go into literature .
I hate sex in the movies. Tried it once, the seat folded up, the drink spilled and that ice,
well it really chilled her mood.

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(04-24-2011, 03:43 AM)Telhast Wrote: Beautiful . Get your talent recognized . Stop studying biology and go into literature .

lol Thanks Tongue
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#10
Your very good at writing these poems. Smile
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