Watch Me Do My Dance

[Fragma]

make it more desirable to the eye

That's not really very good advice.
You could write a bit more about the image, for example, rather than saying "You should blur it", mention which parts you think need blurring.

[JDBar]

There's clearly a light source on the guy, but no apparent shadow. And while your use of vector brushes is appealing especially in terms of a consistent color scheme, the composition is weak in my opinion with no discernible focal point.

I think all these dance images you're doing would look really cool if they were all printed out right next to each other on a wall. It'd be a neat project.

[bkotz]

There's clearly a light source on the guy, but no apparent shadow. And while your use of vector brushes is appealing especially in terms of a consistent color scheme, the composition is weak in my opinion with no discernible focal point.

I think all these dance images you're doing would look really cool if they were all printed out right next to each other on a wall. It'd be a neat project.

im getting them printed and framed so i can put um on my wall in my bedroom

[Stiggie]

It looks awesome mate I really like it man

9/10

[spark™]

Looks neat dude,

The effects really fit in well with the guy and his white jacket.

Keep it up

[Crimson]

Nice render. The brushes are nice(Those are brushes you used right?). But my favorite thing is the background.

[Do0ks]

This is a nasty picture, Keep up the good work.

[elvinguitar]

simple but cool mate!
keep it up dude!

[Wormag]

It looks nice, although it'd look much better if the brushes looked like they were attached to him, instead of being behind him.

[Trustable]

This is very impressive! :o