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#31
03-25-2011, 04:21 AM
(03-24-2011, 11:40 PM)Levi Wrote: I didn't like it when you both rapped together.

This is one in a series of fairly mediocre posts.

It will be helpful to the OP if you explain. Is it the sound, the production or the technique?

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#32
03-25-2011, 07:30 AM
At the beginning it sounds like Weezy, it's a good song indeed. The guy with higher voice ruins it A LITTLE, but it's still pretty fine.
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#33
03-30-2011, 12:27 PM
For a kid just doing this with no recording experience i'm impressed. Not my kind of music though..
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#34
03-30-2011, 12:35 PM
(03-30-2011, 12:27 PM)Ambition Wrote: For a kid just doing this with no recording experience i'm impressed. Not my kind of music though..

He could have had a few live signing experiences. Even if you sing to the radio I would consider that experience lol.
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#35
03-30-2011, 03:28 PM
The only live exp. I have had is freestyles on spot wit high schoolers.
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#36
03-30-2011, 11:47 PM
Sounds pretty good, work on getting your flow more even.
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#37
03-31-2011, 10:40 PM
IMO it was pretty good,the lyrics were nice keep it up Smile
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#38
04-01-2011, 07:55 AM
thanks and my voice is much deeper ATM I am goin through voice changes (puberty)
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#39
04-03-2011, 04:16 AM
Pretty good. Keep it up !

how old are you ?
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#40
04-03-2011, 09:10 AM
Really good rap, how many people sang the song?
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