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10-18-2009, 03:54 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-18-2009, 04:07 AM by ReVamped.)
You've got a pretty nice background going there, but the centre figure ruins it.
It's too..."Sudden". You should also tidy up the motion blur...Get it to flow with the BG - It looks scrappy otherwise.
Other than that though, good job.
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Well done. It's a nice first attempt - I see you've got potential. I'd suggest adding a border next time. I agree with what ReVamped said: you should select your render more carefully next time. Good job.
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I'm not a fan of that one.
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Too many different colours imho. And either remove or reduce the motion blur around the render.
Still good for your first though. Keep it up.
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10-18-2009, 04:27 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-18-2009, 04:30 PM by Acekidd01.)
Yea I was doing it at midnight, and that was the only render available. What kind of render should I get?
Oh and thanks btw guys. It's my first one, so is not that good
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Not bad.. the render does not fit the background at all, and to answer the above post.. Something like anime, lol. I dunno!
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You should get a 2d anime render, or something that looks "holographic".
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I like it. The dude in the middle doesnt really go with the background though