Diss track I wrote.

[Xander]

First of all, I used this beat I found, listened to it, and just started writing.



I don't like you, and my 9 like you even less,
I'll pull the bitch out of my pocket, and I put it to your chest,
So come tell me what you wanna say, and say it to my face,
Cause then I'd pull the fu©king trigger, and I'd lay your ass to waste,

Nothing you will ever say will ever change my mind,
cause when I start to think about it, then I think you'd probably lie,
and if you start to tell a lie again, I think I'll have to shut you up,
and if I have to shut you up, Mossberg pump,

Time to say goodbye bitch, and I think its time to go away,
I'm sick and tired of all your (s)hit, I think I need a holiday,
Say bye to all your friends, cause you wont ever see your friends again,
Cause next time that you see your friends, they'll see your face on CNN,
and if you wanna come with me, and then you'll be a stowaway,
and if you start to run your mouth, and then you'll be a throwaway,
and if you are a throwaway, you'll never see another day,
bottom of the ocean floor, change your name to Holloway.

Rough time estimates

First verse - 15 to 27 seconds

Second verse - 42 seconds to 55 seconds

Third verse - 1.07 to end

[Orgasmic]

Looks pretty good to be honest.
You should record yourself spitting/rapping it

[Hannibal]

That is good..I like it. Good work!

What is that program you used btw? Just curious..

I've never mixed anything before.

[Cybr]

The hi hat throughout the whole song annoys me.

Hannibal, he's using FL Studio, and he's not mixing.

[Hannibal]

The hi hat throughout the whole song annoys me.

Hannibal, he's using FL Studio, and he's not mixing.

I'm noticing the hi hat more now too haha.

And correction on mixing! That would be taking a track someone else has made and editing it correct? Totally new to this..as you can probably tell.

[Cybr]

Mixing is combining multiple songs together, what DJs do. DJs mix songs.
Taking someone else's track and editing it, is called remixing.
What OP did was produce his own beat.

[Xander]

Mixing is combining multiple songs together, what DJs do. DJs mix songs.
Taking someone else's track and editing it, is called remixing.
What OP did was produce his own beat.

Isn't my beat, lol.

I can make dubstep, hardstyle, trance, ambient, but not rap. -.-

[Cybr]

Oh I thought you made the beat.

[Rippin]

Pretty sick dawg.

[Peter L]

Pretty nice, fake, but sounds good.