My friend and I wrote a song ;D

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When I sleep ill be dreaming of you
I wake up, I'll be thinking of you
Tonight I'll be holding youuuu
I hope you're needing me too

Hopes...
Sometimes I wonder why?
We are apart, and there was no time..
Got no clue, dreams or reality ?
Cause now I'm not with you, and its changed my mentality
What do I trust? your words or the act
Hoping all this time that you would turn right back
I cant see yet my eyes are wide open
Can't sleep at night, my pillow is an ocean
Hold you tight, I can hear you speak
My loves in your heart, baby check its deep
My eyes wide open and I realize
It was all a dream and you were a man in disguise
Theres no time to trip, forget about the past
Now I know for a fact that nothing will ever last
I wish we never met it would be less headache
I step out of this nightmare, for my hearts sake

When I sleep I'll be dreaming of you
I wake up, I'll be thinking of you
Tonight I'll be holding youuuu
I hope you're needing me too

Time was too short, too short to realize
Can't stand that we are apaaart
Time was too short, didn't even say goodbyee
Now it's breakin my heaarrt
Just can't stand that we're apaaaart
Knew that it would shatter my heaaart
Just can't stand that we're apaaart
ohh, ohhhh ooooohh

Hopes...
I just can't explain
No more dreams, they flopped in so many ways
I want nothing but that, for you to be happy
Entire smile on your face means the world to me
If I could have one thing I'd want you here
But just a few words made you disappear
Frustrated, lost, nowhere to go
Wanna help you, care for you, I've lost control
This can't be an ending, I want my story
And you said you'd do anything for me
Now I'll step aside cause its your turn
But i refuse to let all of everything burn
I waited there as you cleared your throat
What you said, was the murder you wrote
I wish you luck in everything you do
Hopes....
Just know that i'm missing you

When I sleep I'll be dreaming of you
I wake up, I'll be thinking of you
Tonight I'll be holding youuuu
I hope you're needing me too

Could you ease my pain and show me good things in my life
Could it be that I'm just too blind?
Time was too short, too short to realize
Please help me, need to survivee
Your still in a dreeaaam
Without you life is not what it seems
Can't take this paaaaaaiiin
ohh , ohhhh ooooohh

thoughts?

[Infallible]

Aww how cute are you.

[Maine]

I agree with infallible. That is very cute indeed. How long did it take you?

[margarettefox]

So cute! Doing that means a lot of effort. I am sure you're really inspired, i love this part:

"When I sleep I'll be dreaming of you
I wake up, I'll be thinking of you
Tonight I'll be holding youuuu
I hope you're needing me too"

I suggest that you share your words online! And make it use as an online quotes i'm sure it will work.

[Nexus]

"It was all a dream and you were a man in disguise" I loled at that part.. its rly good tho

[Messy]

I think its beautiful, how long did it take you to write this?

[Thoth]

Nice song must have taken some time and creativity.

[Figaro]

That is pretty good, I am just wondering how long it took you guys to make this.

[juan9087]

Haha nice umm would you make the theme hehe?