Burning Love

[Untouch]

This is unfinished, I need some feedback before I finish it.
I stole the stock from 1 pure devil (person on another site which some people know here), which I rendered before making the signature. :p

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[AceInfinity]

you took the original background theme and applied it to the background behind your render even though you say you rendered it lol. dont really know what to say for this however..

I do think that the "ve" on the end of "Love" is out of color, as it does not fit the rest of the text. and the left and right sides of the mystic fire look different. On the left it's more of a smooth fog transition, whereas on the right side it looks like a harder brush was used to just dim it a bit, you could try making both sides either that fog "blend" transition as you have on the left. I think that woul look best here since it looks like a particle dust type of fire.

not going to rate this yet since you say it's not done

[Untouch]

you took the original background theme and applied it to the background behind your render even though you say you rendered it lol. dont really know what to say for this however..

I do think that the "ve" on the end of "Love" is out of color, as it does not fit the rest of the text. and the left and right sides of the mystic fire look different. On the left it's more of a smooth fog transition, whereas on the right side it looks like a harder brush was used to just dim it a bit, you could try making both sides either that fog "blend" transition as you have on the left. I think that woul look best here since it looks like a particle dust type of fire.

Um what? I completely rendered her and added my own background using c4ds and soft brush with some other layers. Try looking closer at both.

I will be fixing the right side of her when I re-edit.

[AceInfinity]

Um what? I completely rendered her and added my own background using c4ds and soft brush with some other layers. Try looking closer at both.

I will be fixing the right side of her when I re-edit.

No I meant, you re-applied the same background theme with the fire and the black and orange fiery red particle dust lol. It's the same type of setting

[Untouch]

Yeah, that's because that theme most suited the girl.
Just didn't like the original background so I made it more interesting.

[AceInfinity]

Yeah, that's because that theme most suited the girl.
Just didn't like the original background so I made it more interesting.

Looks pretty good to me so far, can't wait to see it when it's done

The chest part makes me want to think that her heart is popping out, that would be a great effect if you could actually create or render a heart coming out of her chest in full. (doesn't have to be gore to do that, otherwise it might affect the current mood of your creation)

[Untouch]

Would probaly look bad, but I could try it.
What maybe would look even better if I made the flame part on her chest a heart shape rather than adding a separate heart which would look out of place.

[-BoodyE-]

This was really awesome. I like it a lot. Use it now .

[Untouch]

Updated with several versions.
I'm starting to like the outcome.

[DeFacto]

It's great Untouch.
I like fire effects.
Nice flow and depth
Great text but I dislike placement.
For me V3 is best.
Keep it up!!!