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The perspective could be slightly better, but I really like the abstract work. The colours fit perfectly together, the font works really nicely & I love the background. (You could also increase the opacity of the text a bit. It's slightly too transparent).
Very good work mate. 7/10 so far but could be a 9 if you work on it a bit more.
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Not to fond of it.
The text needs to be in 3d.
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10-07-2010, 03:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-07-2010, 03:17 PM by AceInfinity.)
Thanks for the feedback, I will add a 3D vector to the text layer to see what the difference will look like, it should give that floating effect that will make for the finishing touch on the overall image. The text, doesn't NEED to be in 3D, but it might look better if I did.
Thats where most people go wrong, by fitting things the way the norm of people expect to see. The contrast between what we think is right, and what we don't think is right, is what makes things interesting.
The transparency isn't an opacity issue, I actually put a hard light blending layer on the text layer so that it matched the color hue in the background slightly, then I added a color overlay on top of that with a different blending layer.
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indeed, it is very different but, I am also having hard time reading, I suppose that's because color styling, bit perfection would be really awesome!
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Its pretty good, I like it.