My first sig!!!!

[r0k]

Well i think im getting better. How does my sig look?

[Eve]

What is the original stock like? It looks good, but the font is too large.

[r0k]

Original stock

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[Fragma]

I think you need more lighting. It's too dark, resulting in lack of depth. Also the text could be smaller and closer to the shoulder of the render. Other than that I like it.

[r0k]

THank you fragma. I will work on that. Im doing a new one now. We will see how it turns out.

[Eve]

Try brightening the light areas and adding a light source to the middle left of the signature. It is good for a first signature, well done.

[r0k]

Thank you i will give that a shot and see how it turns out!

[Nemmyy]

It's not bad, but the text totally ruins it. The colors are off and the font isn't good. Add more lighting, everything is very dark. I really like your use of c4ds, it looks almost exactly like Venom's black web stuff

[AceInfinity]

My sigs always bring a focus to the text, and as a secondary, I keep the background for an added "mood". something appealing to the eye.

Yours is fairly good, but I think you turned down the brightness a bit too much.

[D@niel]

If its your first sig I will give you 9.9/10