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2 New poems
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#11
09-21-2010, 10:11 PM
First one is pretty good although, I'm not really feeling the 2nd one.
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#12
09-24-2010, 03:29 PM
I want more poems T_T
Everything is always better in the end. If things aren't better, it isn't the end.
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#13
09-25-2010, 02:16 AM
I like them but it seems the ocean is a bit basic if you worked on it a bit longer it could be improved.
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