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2 New poems
#1
The Ocean
Waves crash against the soft sand.
This majestic force of nature is unforgiving.
So beautiful, yet so destructive.
Never-ending ~ The ocean.



History (I kind of "stole" [used the same format] of some of my brother's poems.)

History is a repetitive lesson.
It remains untaught and unlearned.
The Past,
The Present,
The Future,
Everything becomes
~History~
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#2
They are pretty goodSmile..
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#3
I like history. Because 2 seconds after I post this, it will be apart of history ;)
Makes ya' think.
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#4
I like them! Keep up your good work man! Smile
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#5
(09-09-2010, 05:13 PM)Robbieava Wrote: I like them! Keep up your good work man! Smile

I wrote these real quick during english class after I finished a quick work packet.

School is gonna be a breeze this year without honors classes.
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#6
Lol yeah I was offered into honors and I said no way. I think if it gets too easy I'll hop into honors again though.
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(09-09-2010, 06:39 PM)Robbieava Wrote: Lol yeah I was offered into honors and I said no way. I think if it gets too easy I'll hop into honors again though.

Same, I didn't do it this year, because I need time for a job so I can pay for driver's ed.
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(09-09-2010, 07:44 PM)lunagron Wrote: Same, I didn't do it this year, because I need time for a job so I can pay for driver's ed.

Exactly what i'm doing Roflmao
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#9
Your are good in writing poems.
If you wrote this in little time.
So keep up the good work.
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#10
Nice one mate. Keep the good work up.
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