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(08-01-2010, 02:41 AM)General Wrote: (Love the idea by the way.)

Thank you, I loved your writing!
(08-01-2010, 08:46 AM)Clay Wrote: Samm realizes he's trapped in the alley, no escape in sight. The mysterious figure grasps the cloak by the shoulder, and casts it off to the side. Samm is now able to see his pursuer very clearly; fit with an all black attire, with one purple streak running from her left shoulder down to her waist. Her hair, perfectly straight, barely reaching half-way down her back, shines radiantly with a violet tone. Samm, intimidated by the figure, squares his scrawny legs, that burn with fire from running, and braces himself for what might come. Samm's heart is beating faster than ever before, racing like a bass drum. The sweat is pouring all over him, his body, working hard to try to control his ever-growing fear. He finally grows frustrated with the silence and shouts, "What the hell do you want?! Why are you chasing me?! What do you want from me..."

"I want you, just you" the voice whispered softly. Her hand slowly begins to raise eventually reaching Samms shoulder, his body wanted to flinch but his mind knew better...
It was all coming back to me "I can't believe it is time".

Nice writing you guys!
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Continue on the story.... - by ElectricDreams - 07-29-2010, 02:36 AM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Ocelot - 08-01-2010, 02:41 AM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Clay - 08-01-2010, 08:46 AM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by ElectricDreams - 08-01-2010, 03:17 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Blue_Social - 08-01-2010, 03:37 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Rhythm - 08-03-2010, 05:52 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Blue_Social - 08-03-2010, 05:59 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Rhythm - 08-03-2010, 11:29 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by ElectricDreams - 08-01-2010, 03:45 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Blue_Social - 08-01-2010, 05:18 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Clay - 08-01-2010, 09:28 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Blue_Social - 08-02-2010, 07:53 AM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by ElectricDreams - 08-03-2010, 04:50 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by ElectricDreams - 08-03-2010, 10:34 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Rhythm - 08-03-2010, 11:10 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Clay - 08-03-2010, 11:19 PM
RE: Continue on the story.... - by Blue_Social - 08-04-2010, 02:37 PM

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