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A rap I've made.
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07-31-2010, 10:31 AM
It's OK. I feel you haven't taken much time over it, time is a must. Go over it and see if you could make it better with different words, illiteration maybe? Some more techniques, google holds alot of information for this sort of stuff. Out of interest, how long have you been writing?
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A rap I've made. - by Amped - 07-25-2010, 12:36 AM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Vish - 07-25-2010, 09:59 AM
RE: A rap I've made. - by killerpop89 - 07-25-2010, 10:07 AM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Clay - 07-25-2010, 12:42 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Tate - 07-26-2010, 01:03 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Omniscient - 07-26-2010, 01:19 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by LMCampbell - 07-28-2010, 12:54 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Tate - 07-28-2010, 02:39 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Virtual Reality - 07-28-2010, 02:56 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Ocelot - 07-31-2010, 10:31 AM
RE: A rap I've made. - by step down kid - 08-01-2010, 04:00 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by ElectricDreams - 08-01-2010, 04:06 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Sam - 08-01-2010, 04:28 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by ElectricDreams - 08-03-2010, 10:36 PM
RE: A rap I've made. - by Rhythm - 08-03-2010, 11:14 PM
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