10-10-2009, 07:30 AM
I didn't listen to til the end, YT is loading slow, I heard til about half. Both seem to be repetitive, maybe add an additional 1-2 layers of tracks and mix and match them to add variety, and compress the beat to 3.5 to 4mins so that the transitions are more frequent. I'd also like to suggest adding some synthed voices or voice samples or an accompaniment that's non-standard (like wind blowing, rattlesnake sounds, mores code, etc.). Overall, it has good potential, they carry a solid beat, but it doesn't get very interesting.
Did you mix them all yourself?
Did you mix them all yourself?
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