[RATE] My last Work

[JDBar]

The color scheme is very nice. I agree with xeke about the blocks obstructing the render just a little. I do not like the text though. I feel the pixel font is appropriate, but I think it should be relocated just a little higher. The reflection on the text should be removed. There's a lot of other simple effects you could apply to the text, but I don't think a reflection shows well in this particular image. Keep it simple so it doesn't detract from the rest of the image. The composition feels good, but the sudden break on the bottom right yellow whisp is irritating. I recommend smudging the edges a little so it'll fade off into the black.

8/10 in the image's current state. Good work.