{Rate} First Every Signature

[~Deities]

Well Since HF is down and i got banned for LQP on Deities trying to get the support award i got bored and started to search PS tutorials.

This is what i came up with along the way.

My Real First Signature without any help (Guessing values) (Click to View)

And After my failed attempt above I searched up some PS Tutorials and perfected it which for me looks like the most amazing Signature ever.
But Im new at Signatures and know that there is something wrong with it that i cant see. So Help me out.



After the above had friends told me to change it around and refine some edges and add some effects and here is the Final Result that I'm using around some of the forums.