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Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex
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I wrote this one for iBruteforce, tell me how you like it.

Aversion Matron


The one I used to call my amour
Left me with much anguish.
She said she had a fond cherish,
Then what was the reason to vanish?

I thought I admired her,
Now I despise her.
She's not that elegant,
Could find better in the terrace.

We once had something memorable,
At this time I can't connote my despair,
I wish I could smell that luscious hair.
It's true, I do despise her
But she was altered.

She was deferential, never pyschotic,
I called her bionic.
I wish I had her again,
Even though this is where it cessates.
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Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by Yin - 04-06-2010, 07:08 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by hockeynut35 - 04-09-2010, 08:19 AM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by Yin - 04-11-2010, 12:44 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by C00k13 - 04-11-2010, 12:47 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by TØχiςated™ - 04-11-2010, 01:10 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by Christopher - 04-11-2010, 01:12 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by Roro - 07-03-2010, 08:10 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by Reality - 07-07-2010, 06:53 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by MySocksAreWet - 07-07-2010, 09:52 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by 6010fd12 - 07-10-2010, 12:49 PM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by Solidify - 07-19-2010, 09:00 AM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by Clay - 07-24-2010, 12:37 AM
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex - by Logan - 07-24-2010, 12:48 AM

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