12-10-2009, 07:29 PM
Yes i agree never write in 1st person. Try not to use words like "us" ect, on the other hand you used good words, and you sounded proffesional. Good job.
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Critique this essay? - by Elektrisk - 12-09-2009, 04:08 PM
RE: Critique this essay? - by ElephantShoe - 12-09-2009, 04:37 PM
RE: Critique this essay? - by Ionica - 12-10-2009, 06:22 PM
RE: Critique this essay? - by WirelessWave - 12-10-2009, 07:29 PM
RE: Critique this essay? - by UID=0 - 12-11-2009, 04:29 AM
RE: Critique this essay? - by Tank - 12-11-2009, 08:50 AM
RE: Critique this essay? - by Elektrisk - 12-11-2009, 10:22 AM
RE: Critique this essay? - by Omniscient - 12-11-2009, 10:53 AM
RE: Critique this essay? - by WirelessWave - 12-11-2009, 03:11 PM
RE: Critique this essay? - by Tank - 12-13-2009, 02:39 AM
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RE: Critique this essay? - by Tank - 12-15-2009, 10:24 PM
RE: Critique this essay? - by Slankey - 03-07-2010, 09:17 PM
RE: Critique this essay? - by Elektrisk - 03-07-2010, 09:24 PM
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RE: Critique this essay? - by smileyface - 04-08-2010, 03:02 AM
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