12-09-2009, 04:37 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-09-2009, 04:38 PM by ElephantShoe.)
In my opinion, it's pretty good, as a matter of fact, it's very good. Better than anything I could write. When I wrote my essay for the SAT, I didn't talk in first person because I was afraid they would dock off points. It's really hard to write in another perspective when you're trying to make it persuasive.