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A Beautiful Little Dream
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02-09-2012, 07:21 PM
It's a great poem, no doubt. In the last sentence,
Quote:If ten was I not already captivated
typo?
Also, your profile picture is sideways Tongue
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A Beautiful Little Dream - by itylernallen - 02-08-2012, 03:27 PM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by BlackChaos - 02-09-2012, 05:39 AM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by itylernallen - 02-09-2012, 06:55 PM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by D3xus - 02-09-2012, 07:21 PM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by itylernallen - 02-11-2012, 05:56 AM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by Fluxie - 02-16-2012, 01:12 PM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by [M] - 02-26-2012, 07:21 PM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by sunexim - 03-02-2012, 06:17 AM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by [M] - 03-02-2012, 05:14 PM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by itylernallen - 03-11-2012, 08:39 PM
RE: A Beautiful Little Dream - by Starbreak - 03-07-2012, 05:59 AM

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