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[RAP] I loved you so much
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01-13-2012, 01:14 PM
It's very mediocre. It is incredibly easy to rhyme and keep syllables relatively identical.

What separates okay rappers from great rappers is the creativity such as the play on words, fitting many syllables into a bar properly, and delivery is one of the biggest things. You have no delivery since it is just text.
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[RAP] I loved you so much - by TalishHF - 01-13-2012, 05:46 AM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by Cronus - 01-13-2012, 06:38 AM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by Techie. - 01-13-2012, 10:20 AM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by Peter L - 01-13-2012, 01:14 PM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by Cronus - 01-14-2012, 06:54 AM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by Peter L - 01-14-2012, 07:35 AM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by Cronus - 01-14-2012, 08:39 AM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by Juicy Booty - 01-14-2012, 08:55 AM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by mybboss - 01-14-2012, 09:03 AM
RE: [RAP] I loved you so much - by DoX - 01-21-2012, 08:56 PM

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