My first Cinema 4D

[Uzi]

It looks decent but it's a low quality image, and looks a little distorted with the noise.
Anyway, I like the background - the text is fairly simple and it's easy enough to create red text using Cinema 4D.
I've seen something similar to this but only it was a .gif and the glass shattered whilst the text floated around.
You should try something like that but for a beginner I think you've done an alright job with it, well done.