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Poem/Rap
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Something i wrote a while back.

I wanted to run it by you for when i got out;
Grab my wallet, my license, and head on out.
I could drive to Illinois, or bitch out my dad;
Life as I've been living is way too damn sad.
My girl just about lost her mind,
Two weeks before, her dad committed suicide.
The funeral was the very next day,
I couldn't go, I went insane.

I was lost, in what I had done;
Gone, reborn, remade.

Now I'm in college;
It's all spiraling downwards;
Only hope I see is to give up.

Its a dark hole;
One I've been in many times;
I look down, and it seems more appealing than up.
Dug a little deeper, here I am.

Got back into some old crap;
Now im too far gone.






Tell me what you think, if you are just wanting to be a pain, or a troll, keep it off this thread please.
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Messages In This Thread
Poem/Rap - by Synn - 10-31-2011, 03:18 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Muted - 10-31-2011, 07:30 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Party - 11-04-2011, 03:46 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by sam4 - 11-05-2011, 11:22 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Zombot - 11-06-2011, 06:33 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Sql - 11-06-2011, 06:34 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Zombot - 11-06-2011, 06:41 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Synn - 11-06-2011, 08:35 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Criteria - 11-07-2011, 08:04 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Contribution - 11-08-2011, 05:55 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Starstruck - 11-08-2011, 05:50 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Speedy - 11-14-2011, 12:25 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Jinu - 11-26-2011, 06:27 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Burner™ - 11-26-2011, 06:36 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Shutdown™ - 11-26-2011, 09:08 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by 0verdose - 11-26-2011, 09:32 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by New Jersey - 11-26-2011, 10:44 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by sean4430 - 11-26-2011, 11:45 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Synn - 12-03-2011, 11:56 AM
RE: Poem/Rap - by SuhinderG - 11-26-2011, 02:13 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Graveee - 11-26-2011, 06:57 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by AP4THY - 11-26-2011, 08:47 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by User Bars - 12-03-2011, 01:12 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Made - 12-04-2011, 04:33 PM
RE: Poem/Rap - by Infinity - 12-05-2011, 09:22 AM

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