08-14-2011, 12:53 AM
Hey SF,
Just writing a new song and wondering if you can give your thought to me please, remember that this song has not been finished yet. Just give it a rating out of 10 and some CnC (Constructive and criticizim).
What have I done, is this the end
Was this pretend, or reality
It’s never gonna be the same
I’ve been through it all, up and downs
But what comes around goes around
Feel free, but its never gonna be the same
Now your gone, I realize I was wrong
Never ever gonna be strong again
This world if out of my hands
But tonight I’m throwing it all in
It’s on a suicide line,
My life’s on a suicide line
Tomorrows the end
The end is here
It’s on a suicide line
Nothing I do, nothing you do
But that one thing, will change my life
© Copyright Protected Ownership Of Curtis Hyland
Just writing a new song and wondering if you can give your thought to me please, remember that this song has not been finished yet. Just give it a rating out of 10 and some CnC (Constructive and criticizim).
What have I done, is this the end
Was this pretend, or reality
It’s never gonna be the same
I’ve been through it all, up and downs
But what comes around goes around
Feel free, but its never gonna be the same
Now your gone, I realize I was wrong
Never ever gonna be strong again
This world if out of my hands
But tonight I’m throwing it all in
It’s on a suicide line,
My life’s on a suicide line
Tomorrows the end
The end is here
It’s on a suicide line
Nothing I do, nothing you do
But that one thing, will change my life
© Copyright Protected Ownership Of Curtis Hyland