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[Short Poem] Blood
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#11
07-16-2011, 07:11 PM
Very meaningful but you should add more poetic techniques into it.
Not trying to be your school teacher but similes, alliteration, etc all add to the effect.
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[Short Poem] Blood - by Metapod - 07-05-2011, 06:00 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by jhfire - 07-05-2011, 09:06 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by Metapod - 07-05-2011, 11:38 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by 630 - 07-07-2011, 12:27 AM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by Spafic - 07-07-2011, 12:41 AM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by specizripn - 07-07-2011, 01:21 AM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by B3cnoc - 07-07-2011, 04:40 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by Mayhem - 07-08-2011, 08:30 AM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by Mr. Beaux - 07-16-2011, 05:31 AM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by Deceive - 07-16-2011, 06:02 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by Blic - 07-16-2011, 07:11 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by Metapod - 07-17-2011, 12:41 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Blood - by Sin. - 07-16-2011, 11:15 PM

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