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A Light In The Window, Short Story.
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07-02-2011, 03:52 PM
A wonderful story, but your creativity has the potential to extend further beyond. Halfway through the story, instead of continuously using the word "Tom", try using a few more pronouns. Besides that and the possible grammatic errors, your work was definitely an invigorating read. Quite different from what I've usually read on this forum.
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