05-30-2011, 06:53 PM
not bad, the small clutter to the left of her chest area seems a little random though, I can't make out what that would be. I think the "shatters" or whatever those things are, would be better with a radial type of 'explosion' of them, to add to the outward flow. It would fill up a little of the orange sky there too, so it doesn't seem like it's just a background distant from the person. A flow like that would help things blend together better in my opinion, and you wouldn't need much of the 'shatters'