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My first poem
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Hey friends i had recently make a poem which i want to share with you.This is specially for my betrayed love.so guys it's my 1st try.I'm not good at writing but just want to convey my message through poetry.
In the night of sorrow,
in the depth of my heart,
I feel the aloneness,
to hide my sorrow i uses to weep,
now a days love is like a toy,
some one play with you.
and leave you alone.
dedicated to my betrayed love.
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My first poem - by G0dfath3r - 05-24-2011, 02:47 AM
RE: My first poem - by BlackChaos - 05-24-2011, 04:59 AM
RE: My first poem - by G0dfath3r - 05-24-2011, 05:09 AM
RE: My first poem - by BlackChaos - 05-24-2011, 05:32 AM
RE: My first poem - by cOld fus1on - 05-24-2011, 06:36 AM
RE: My first poem - by Invincible - 05-24-2011, 11:56 AM
RE: My first poem - by Impulses SF - 05-24-2011, 04:59 PM

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