05-16-2011, 09:37 PM
Thats a very nice poem, i think people here will surely tell you your mistakes and advice you. For me i felt what you wanted to show so its a nice poem.
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[POEM] Dead Inside
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[POEM] Dead Inside - by Spafic - 05-16-2011, 07:49 PM
RE: [POEM] Dead Inside - by Invincible - 05-16-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: [POEM] Dead Inside - by G0dfath3r - 05-24-2011, 04:57 AM
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