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[Poem] Fate, Intertwined
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Our fate is linked, forever intertwined.
We breathe together, with heart, soul and mind.
Where has that love gone?
When we once got along.
One of us went wrong,
And now those days are gone.

Today, day after yesterday we had to fight.
Alarm clock rang to awaken us from a good night.
Perhaps we never meant it, perhaps we misunderstood.
Maybe you did, I was wrong.
And now those days are gone.

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Author's Note: A free verse poem I just wrote up. Feedback, as always, is appreciated. Smile


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[Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by BlackChaos - 05-15-2011, 11:12 AM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by Amp™ - 05-15-2011, 11:57 AM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by BlackChaos - 05-15-2011, 12:08 PM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by Invincible - 05-15-2011, 12:26 PM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by BlackChaos - 05-15-2011, 06:17 PM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by Tunasty™ - 05-15-2011, 06:31 PM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by Invincible - 05-15-2011, 09:03 PM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by Telhast - 05-17-2011, 05:49 AM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by BlackChaos - 05-17-2011, 06:01 AM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by Invincible - 05-17-2011, 10:20 AM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by Pulse - 05-17-2011, 02:48 PM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by BlackChaos - 05-18-2011, 10:56 AM
RE: [Poem] Fate, Intertwined - by Injection - 05-19-2011, 09:17 PM

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