05-12-2011, 02:52 PM
(05-12-2011, 02:40 PM)Hate Wrote: Wow, great job.
I posted my .. well, don't really know if you'd class them as poetry but I'd say they're all dark thoughts, and this has good dark side (which has the most emotion/meaning imo)
"behold, I'm as dead as a living tree." < Love that, wouldn't have thought of that myself.
There is a hidden meaning between the words of that line. There are many ways to interpret it. You decide which way you want to. :-)
I hate sex in the movies. Tried it once, the seat folded up, the drink spilled and that ice,
well it really chilled her mood.
well it really chilled her mood.