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[POEM] Reach out to me [POEM]
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You may write me down in history,
with your bitter, twisted lies.

I face the pain, the agony,
while you reap the joys.

My tears fall endlessly,
but you wont realize.

You're vision is darkened,
by the material things in life.

You said you knew me,
behold, I'm as dead as a living tree.

My sleep burns with endless thoughts,
while you slip away into the dark world.

Its hard for me to smile when I'm hurting,
if only you cared enough to reach out,

Its easier for you to walk away,
then it is for you to see the depth of my despair.



This is the first poem I ever completed. I have many more saved as drafts that I never had the heart to complete. Your critique and comments will help me in completing my lost memories.
Thank you.
I hate sex in the movies. Tried it once, the seat folded up, the drink spilled and that ice,
well it really chilled her mood.

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[POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Telhast - 05-12-2011, 01:27 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by BlackChaos - 05-12-2011, 01:40 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Amp™ - 05-12-2011, 01:54 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Telhast - 05-12-2011, 01:57 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by BlackChaos - 05-12-2011, 06:18 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Hate - 05-12-2011, 02:40 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Telhast - 05-12-2011, 02:52 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Invincible - 05-12-2011, 07:44 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Telhast - 05-13-2011, 11:41 AM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Invincible - 05-14-2011, 04:51 AM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Telhast - 05-19-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Injection - 05-19-2011, 09:17 PM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by Telhast - 05-20-2011, 11:23 AM
RE: [POEM] Reach out to me [POEM] - by G0dfath3r - 05-27-2011, 08:51 AM

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