05-12-2011, 01:16 AM
The song it self is alright, I like the lyrics.
I'm on a laptop with shitty speakers, so it sounds bad anyway, but you could play with trebble and bass settings, the piano or what it is (not sure on these speakers -.-) is too loud if you ask me.
The rest of the beat is awesome, still too loud for the loudness of your voice, and you should train your singing/rapping more, I like it now how it is, but there is always room for improvement. ;)
Just keep up, you obviously got some talent.... btw, the beat reminds of a song (like most of the times), did you made it?
I'm on a laptop with shitty speakers, so it sounds bad anyway, but you could play with trebble and bass settings, the piano or what it is (not sure on these speakers -.-) is too loud if you ask me.
The rest of the beat is awesome, still too loud for the loudness of your voice, and you should train your singing/rapping more, I like it now how it is, but there is always room for improvement. ;)
Just keep up, you obviously got some talent.... btw, the beat reminds of a song (like most of the times), did you made it?
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