Here's a short poem I just made. Feedback?
Valiantly he stood alone,
A symbol among men.
Bodies all around,
His sword gleaming crimson.
Flag bestowed upon his back,
He plants it into the Earth.
Now, victorious and worn,
He casts his sword aside.
He vows never to fight,
For he mourns what he sees.
-Ronald Munday
Valiantly he stood alone,
A symbol among men.
Bodies all around,
His sword gleaming crimson.
Flag bestowed upon his back,
He plants it into the Earth.
Now, victorious and worn,
He casts his sword aside.
He vows never to fight,
For he mourns what he sees.
-Ronald Munday
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