[Poem] Meant To Be

[BlackChaos]

I think if your gonna rhyme at all? Make it rhyme in a sequence. Also needs a little metaphor help. I like the feel and the reality of it. It's a poem most can connect with from prior life exp. keep up the good work.

This is the first poem I wrote without a rhyme sequence. As in little to none rhyming at all. My other works have a lot of sequential rhyming in them.
Metaphors...
I guess I got a wee bit carried away lol

Thanks for the positive criticism. =)