04-26-2011, 10:29 AM
I think if your gonna rhyme at all? Make it rhyme in a sequence. Also needs a little metaphor help. I like the feel and the reality of it. It's a poem most can connect with from prior life exp. keep up the good work.
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[Poem] Meant To Be
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[Poem] Meant To Be - by BlackChaos - 04-26-2011, 10:08 AM
RE: [Poem] Meant To Be - by ImFocuzz - 04-26-2011, 10:29 AM
RE: [Poem] Meant To Be - by BlackChaos - 04-26-2011, 10:39 AM
RE: [Poem] Meant To Be - by Ambition - 04-26-2011, 09:24 PM
RE: [Poem] Meant To Be - by BlackChaos - 04-27-2011, 04:56 AM
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