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[Poem/Rap] Absurd
Telhast Offline
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04-24-2011, 03:41 AM
You need to beef it up . Looks great though . It would be easier to read if it was divided .
I hate sex in the movies. Tried it once, the seat folded up, the drink spilled and that ice,
well it really chilled her mood.

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[Poem/Rap] Absurd - by BlackChaos - 04-23-2011, 07:59 PM
RE: [Poem/Rap] Absurd - by Telhast - 04-24-2011, 03:41 AM
RE: [Poem/Rap] Absurd - by BlackChaos - 04-24-2011, 03:53 AM

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