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Not Creative Writing, but need C&C / Proofread
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(04-12-2011, 09:19 AM)Swat Runs Train Wrote: I would change this:

have grossed over a thousand dollars in profit

Gross is generally referring to total money brought in before expenses and overhead are subtracted, profit being the resulting figure so it doesn't make sense to use both to refer to the same amount of money.

Switched to generated.
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RE: Not Creative Writing, but need C&C / Proofread - by Astrael - 04-12-2011, 09:21 AM

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