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04-05-2011, 08:43 AM

(04-05-2011, 08:16 AM)Delicious Wrote: It's decent but not the best. I would rate your poem 7/10 but keep working and you will get much better!

That's my first time written in my life and i got 7/10 wow Yeye

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Really thanks for the feedback.

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DreamFly - by Colonel - 04-02-2011, 11:30 PM

RE: DreamFly - by panDa. - 04-04-2011, 12:21 AM

RE: DreamFly - by Colonel - 04-04-2011, 07:53 AM

RE: DreamFly - by Stiggie - 04-04-2011, 07:55 AM

RE: DreamFly - by Colonel - 04-05-2011, 06:54 AM

RE: DreamFly - by Delicious - 04-05-2011, 08:16 AM

RE: DreamFly - by Colonel - 04-05-2011, 08:43 AM

RE: DreamFly - by Delicious - 04-05-2011, 12:40 PM

RE: DreamFly - by Colonel - 04-07-2011, 06:34 AM

RE: DreamFly - by Fresh Prince - 04-05-2011, 09:21 PM

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