04-04-2011, 12:21 AM
It's not bad at all just you're using It's 2 times in a row than after that Didin't two times in a row and many senteces are kinda used too many times. Anyways good job 
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RE: DreamFly - by panDa. - 04-04-2011, 12:21 AM
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RE: DreamFly - by Stiggie - 04-04-2011, 07:55 AM
RE: DreamFly - by Colonel - 04-05-2011, 06:54 AM
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RE: DreamFly - by Colonel - 04-07-2011, 06:34 AM
RE: DreamFly - by Fresh Prince - 04-05-2011, 09:21 PM
RE: DreamFly - by Justin - 04-05-2011, 09:22 PM
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