03-26-2011, 09:01 PM
(03-26-2011, 08:51 PM)Ambition Wrote: That's exactly what I was going for. Thanks for the feedback everyone. Keep it coming!
Free verse is more for the thought process of the reader, and you've put a few lines in here that would raise the readers thinking level, so it's good. Most other types of poems are for sarcasm or imagery in some shape or form of detail. More of the fancy rhyme scheme types.
I'd like to see a few more of those around the creative writing area. Lots of people generally go for a diary/journal/personal response type of writing in here.