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PERCEPTION
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03-26-2011, 08:51 PM
(03-26-2011, 06:04 PM)Infinity Wrote: Not too bad, It has the feel of a free verse poem, nothing 100% organized about the lines though, which is why I would consider this free verse. That's exactly what I was going for. Thanks for the feedback everyone. Keep it coming! One day, your life will flash before your eyes. Make sure it's worth watching.
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PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 03-25-2011, 11:23 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by SeePlusPlus - 03-25-2011, 11:34 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by GrammarPhreak - 03-25-2011, 11:38 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 03-25-2011, 11:55 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 03-26-2011, 05:39 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by fuck_prohibition - 03-26-2011, 05:42 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Future Billionaire - 03-26-2011, 05:42 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by AceInfinity - 03-26-2011, 06:04 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 03-26-2011, 08:51 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by AceInfinity - 03-26-2011, 09:01 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by SeePlusPlus - 03-26-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 03-26-2011, 09:59 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by estomesJON - 04-18-2011, 03:34 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 04-24-2011, 05:07 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Zammyslave - 04-24-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 04-25-2011, 12:53 AM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 05-30-2011, 11:24 AM
RE: PERCEPTION - by davidmarker - 05-31-2011, 10:23 AM
RE: PERCEPTION - by !LoL - 06-01-2011, 05:11 AM
RE: PERCEPTION - by Ambition - 06-04-2011, 09:02 AM
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