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My Rap? What you think? Please Reply
Peter L Offline
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03-23-2011, 03:31 PM
Sounds alright, your flow sounds off sometimes. Try taking more steady breaths and once your voice gets deeper it'll sound x2 better.

Only complaint, is be REAL. You are not on top of the world and my girl is not with you. There are many good rappers like yourself, but no one wants to hear that crap.
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RE: My Rap? What you think? Please Reply - by Peter L - 03-23-2011, 03:31 PM
RE: My Rap? What you think? Please Reply - by Eve - 03-23-2011, 09:13 PM
RE: My Rap? What you think? Please Reply - by Eve - 03-23-2011, 10:28 PM
RE: My Rap? What you think? Please Reply - by Eve - 03-25-2011, 04:21 AM

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