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RedactedRedacted
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I concur with Ms. Eve. It would seem to me that your composition of words is quite exceptional. And yes, it did seem much like a rap, even though rap is the either complete ignorance + unique usage of imagery + words, or, advanced sensitivity to the words and meanings + advanced composition of the words and how they work together.
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RedactedRedacted - by fuck_prohibition - 03-21-2011, 06:01 PM
RE: My third poem - by Eve - 03-22-2011, 03:14 AM
RE: My third poem - by fuck_prohibition - 03-22-2011, 03:30 AM
RE: My third poem - by Eve - 03-22-2011, 03:33 AM
RedactedRedacted - by fuck_prohibition - 03-22-2011, 03:39 AM
RE: My third poem - by Eve - 03-22-2011, 07:29 AM
RedactedRedacted - by fuck_prohibition - 03-22-2011, 11:32 AM
RE: My third poem - by Bullet Proof - 03-22-2011, 12:02 PM
RE: My third poem - by Calx - 03-22-2011, 01:04 PM

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