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Poem - Angry Determination
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I dig down, deeper than ever before.
There was nothing left, there was nothing more.

Nothing to do, no where to go,
No one to love, no one to show .....

What I'm made of, what can be done.
It's not a joke,
This is anything but fun.

Me, Me, Me - That's all I thought of..
I didn't think about her,
I didn't care for her love.

"You did all you could" - my friends are going to say,
But I know that's not the truth, I know it's not okay.

But wait, if this is true ...
Why did I do it?

The answer is simple...

I LOVE YOU!


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This is just something I wrote quickly at 3AM yesterday. Definitely not my best work, but I kind of liked it in a weird way. Your feedback / constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated!
One day, your life will flash before your eyes. Make sure it's worth watching.
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Poem - Angry Determination - by Ambition - 03-12-2011, 10:12 AM
RE: Poem - Angry Determination - by Locke - 03-12-2011, 10:36 AM
RE: Poem - Angry Determination - by Ambition - 03-12-2011, 10:42 AM
RE: Poem - Angry Determination - by estomesJON - 04-18-2011, 03:35 PM
RE: Poem - Angry Determination - by Kitten - 04-18-2011, 06:38 PM
RE: Poem - Angry Determination - by Spectrum - 04-19-2011, 09:02 AM
RE: Poem - Angry Determination - by BlackChaos - 04-23-2011, 12:19 PM
RE: Poem - Angry Determination - by Ambition - 04-24-2011, 05:06 PM

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