When The Moon Comes Up

[Untouch]

I think there's too much going on in the background alongside the effects on the main character.

Try choosing a C4D with less going on.

Other than that, the pink glowing spots should be a reddish, matching the characters clothes.

I think the c4ds he has are perfect actually.

This might be my favourite piece of yours.
Only thing I would criticise is those purple dots
I would probaly change them to silver or white.
Apart from that I'm liking it.